BN: Page One, Chapter One. I will get the cover in soon! I just wanted to show the first page just to get some ideas on what you guys thought of it XD The art style and everything. PLEASE Tell me what you think?
LOL yeah XD I wanted to kind of connect it with how today would look like as opposed with how it looks like in their world XD Though I guess even our time would seem like a utopia to them XDDD
Just personal choice I hated how it just showed the paper flapping, so I wanted people to move their eyes across it instead of just being like, BAM! IN YOUR FACE. Not sure if it worked but I liked it better. XD
Your words are touching ^ u ^
Not sure if it worked but I liked it better. XD